话题写作 1

假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你校新来不久的外教 Lucy 给你发了一封电子邮件，希望周末到你们城市附近去参观几个名胜古迹。请用英语给她回复一封电子邮件介绍当地的名胜古迹和特色。

注意：字数 120-150 词，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

Dear Lucy,

I’m more than delighted to receive your e-mail. Learning you plan to visit our city on the weekend, I’m eager to introduce our charming city to you.

Being the capital of thirteen dynasties sets Xi’an apart from other cities in the world. It’s a must-see for both domestic and overseas visitors.

Xi’an owns many historical relics , such as Terra-Cotta Warriors. Big Wild Goose Pagoda, Small Wild Goose Pagoda, well-preserved city walls from Ming dynasty, and the Bell Tower and Drum Tower. In addition, the natural scenery of Mount Hua, Huaqing Hot Spring, and Lishan is also attractive to visitors.

Any visitor to Xi’an cannot resist the temptation of hundreds of local snacks, of which the “shredded pancake in mutton broth” stands out.

Visitors are offered hotels of different rates. The public transport is convenient for visitors to reach any of their destinations. Visitors will surely find their desired relaxation there.

If you need some help , please don’t hesitate to turn to me for help. Wish you a good time.

Yours，

Li Hua

【名师点评】

本文写作十分成功。地道的语言和丰富的句式：分词作状语、动名词做主语、非限制性定语从句、主动和被动语态是本文的亮点。多处使用地道短语和高级词汇，表达完整而准确。

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好词：1. charming : 迷人的、有魅力的 2. well-preserved: 保存完好的 3. stand out:突出

4. destination ：目的地 5. desired ：渴望的，想得到的 6. hesitate : 犹豫

7. relaxation: 放松 8. resist :抵制、抵抗

1. be more than delighted to do: 非常高兴做某事 2. be eager to do: 渴望做某事

3. set... apart from : 使...与众不同 4. domestic and overseas visitors: 国内外游客

好句：1.Being the capital of thirteen dynasties sets Xi’an apart from other cities in the world.

It’s a must-see for both domestic and overseas visitors.

身为 13 朝之都，使得西安与其他城市不同。它是国内外游客的必看之处。

好处：动名词做主语，set...apart from, a must---see 等短语语言地道。

2. Any visitor to Xi’an cannot resist the temptation of hundreds of local snacks, of which the “shredded pancake in mutton broth” stands out.

任何去西安的游客都无法抵制当地数以百计的美食的诱惑，其中最出名的是肉

夹馍。

好处： 运用了非限制性定语从句， cannot resist the temptation of 和 stands out

地道的表达，写出了西安的特色。

【话题写作 2】

你的朋笔友 Amy 写信，打算暑假来北京度假。希望你写信告诉她有关北京的情况。并且给她一些建议。

注意：字数 120-150 词，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

Dear Amy,

Happy to hear that you plan to spend your summer holiday in Beijing. In your last letter, you said you want to know something about Beijing. Now I will introduce something about Beijing to you.

Located in the northeast of China, our capital city, Beijing, is a large and modern city with a long history, covering an area of 16,400 square kilometers. In the past 30 years, Beijing has witnessed great changes , of which the rapidly developing economy is a highlight. Besides, its convenient transportation makes it easy for you to get anywhere you want to visit.

Certainly, the rich cultures in Beijing will never fail to impress you. Beijing holds many places of interest. The main attractions, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and the Forbidden City, make Beijing one of the most popular cities to visit. On top of these wonderful places, the delicious food can also make your mouth water.

If you want to have fun here, please keep the following advice in mind: Plan your trip well before starting, since it has so many shows, activities and great souvenir shops. Come ready to walk a lot be sure to wear some comfortable sneakers or other walking shoes!

I can’t wait to be your guide here. I bet you will have great fun here! Looking forward to your coming !

Yours Betty

【名师点评】

本文层次分明， 条理清晰. 把北京的地理、历史、人口、发展、文化和美食形象的展现出来。语言丰富，句式多样。never fail to impress you, make your mouth water 等短语的运用，使语言地道而生动，写作十分成功。

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好词：

1. be located in: 位于 2. cover an area of : 占用多大面积 3. On top of: 除...之外

4. never fail to impress you 一定使你印象深刻 5. make your mouth water: 使你流口水

6. Have fun：玩得高兴 7. can’t wait to do: 迫不及待做.. 8. keep...in mind: 把...记住

好句：1. Located in the northeast of China, our capital city, Beijing, is a large and modern city with a long history, covering an area of 16,400 square kilometers.

位于中国东北部，我们的首都北京是一个拥有悠久历史的现代化大都市，占地

16400 平方公里。

好处：be located in 位于；covering an area of:占地多少 运用了同位语，分词和过去分词作状语

2. In the past 30 years, Beijing has witnessed great changes , of which the rapidly developing economy is a highlight.

在过去的 30 年，北京发生了巨大变化，其中快速发展的经济是一大亮点。

好处：witness 拟人手法 among which...非限制性定语从句。

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